The feedback I received was that I firstly needed to make it clear that the interviewer was not heard, so it was suggested to me that I should place in brackets this to the side of the character.
It was also suggested that I should place stage direction in italics, to clearly distinguish it from the normal text.
Lastly, I had previously used sentences such as "Then there is a close up of..." and to save text, was suggested to go straight to "Close up of...".
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